Trust me

photo prompt by Bjorn RudbergFF

“And that’s the story.”

He looked at me and then at the sign, and then back at me.

“I don’t believe a word of it.  It reminds me of an old fable, or a really bad TV movie.  There is absolutely no way any of that is true.”

“So you don’t believe me?  Not any of it?” I asked.

“Not a chance, babe.  Just another story.”

I shrugged my shoulders and turned around walking away from the sign.  Believe it or not, I thought to myself.

I guess he’s not the one for me.

 

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Thanks for Rochelle Wisoff Fields for keeping Friday Fictioneers going.  This story is what you call writing a story when you have nothing to write.  LOL

 

About Life in the 50's and beyond...

Welcome to Life in the 50's and 60's and beyond .... where I write about my childhood memories, music of the 60's and about life in the country. I am a mother, grandmother, farmer's wife, business owner, and retired teacher.
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12 Responses to Trust me

  1. MMmmm. Now I want to know what the story is!!!

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  2. I wonder if she’s ever gonna find a fellow believer?

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  3. Liz Young says:

    That was a good test, and well done for walking away.

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  4. lisarey1990 says:

    Aw, that was sad for the person in the story but at least they came to a final conclusion about the guy. Great story.

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  5. granonine says:

    A novel use of the prompt, and a good way to choose a guy. She’s right to walk away.

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  6. Great take, it does not matter what the story was. He either doesn’t trust her, or is not fun enough to play along. Either ways, not worth it 🙂

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  7. Clearly, it was not meant to be. Excellent.

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  8. pennygadd51 says:

    You’ve found a lovely, laconic voice for your main character, and you tell the story fluently. Nice writing.

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  9. jillyfunnell says:

    Well written and intriguing. I wanted to know more about this relationship.

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  10. James McEwan says:

    Lovely, a test of compatibility. Saves time. Enjoyed this.

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  11. Sandra says:

    Sometimes that’s all it takes to walk away.

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  12. Iain Kelly says:

    No point going on if there is a lack of trust. Nice use of the prompt.

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